IELTS Writing Practice 2 Task 2

Unpaid community service is suggested as a mandatory program in high school. Some people believe that if the students join this program, it develop their soft skills, such as communication, time management, and working experience. The positive and negative side will be presented in the following paragraph.   

 Firstly, student in high school usually have much free time, however, many of them utilize their free time not for good activities, such as after-school club, but for benefit less activities, like hang out with their friends, game online, and even some crime and dangerous activities. This situation is a worst situation of the school that they must consider for good compulsory program which student will spend their free time for these kinds of program. Unpaid community service is the one of excellent activities which students need because it develop their soft skills.

Secondly, many companies need workers with high standard requirements recently. To make this happen, student must aware the needed of soft skill development program. By joining community organisation or charitable forum, they can have and gain new skill and get new connection as well. They will be more creative, able to manage their time better, know how to communicate well to other people, and become open-minded people and it will never happen if the students just spend their time for meaningless activities.

However, there is also drawback, although it is not really problematic. Time is the problem for student which join unpaid community service because a few of  their time for school is taken. This problem can be solved  by good time management.

In my  opinion, I agree to implement this program to students in high school because the benefit which student can get is very precious. I hope this program will start in the high school as soon as possible.