Rabu, 05 Maret 2014

IELTS Writing Practice 3 Task 2


          Recently, public health is one of biggest problem in the world because of the bad lifestyle of the people around the world and environment influence. Some people say that by adding the number of sport facilities will help to improve public health. However, in my opinion, adding the number of sport facilities is only supporting solution but encourage people to have healthy lifestyle is the most important thing if we want to fix public health issues.
            Presently, the ease in the various aspect of life has been provided by technology which lead people to the laziness and choose an easier choice for their life. It causes the people have passive lifestyle, especially if we live in the metropolitan city. We can see this case to the people with high working hours. Usually they hard to find a chance just to spend their time to walk because they prefer to use car to their office because it is easier. In addition, the ease, which provided by technology, influence the what people eat in their busy schedule. They usually prefer to eat instant noodle to healthy food, like salad , because they have no time to make breakfast in the morning. This condition will affect to people health because of there is no one choice which train their body to get healthy condition.
            According to previous paragraph, lazy or have no time to take time for exercise is the most common reason why people have bad habit which influence their health. That’s why, we can not only build good and many sport facilities, but also encourage people to use that facilities. In the other words, encourage people to aware about importance to have good healthy life is the main homework must be done by us.

            By increasing the number of sport facilities, it will help people to find easily sport facilities around them, but in my opinion, raising the awareness to have healthy life is the main solution to solve public health issues. So, it is very important to build sport facilities but it must be coupled with counseling about healthy life activities.       

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